Heartbroken

In the Languaje class, with Andrea Shester, we wrote a story, that must include an animal and a surprise. It had to include examples of the following too:

• Simple past - Past Continuous
• Past Continuous - Past continuous
• Past perfect
• Connectors
• Direct speech

''I´m alone, I will be forever alone'' He said; and I said he, because he had not name. Where he lived, everything was neglected dirty. When a film is sad,the colors are greyer than when it is a nice movie, where everything is colorful. He, a beautiful but dirty dog, lived  in a dog pound since always. There, everything seemed depressed; and you could even listen to the disconsolateness everywhere like when the old iron bars were being opened because another dog was going to be sacrificated.

But everything changed one day, an extraordinary day. The door opened and a man entered. He was talking with the guard while he was walking. He (the dog) didn´t know why, but when the man was looking at him, he told the guard ''This one'' and he went away. The guard took the dog, he showered him, and he was given to the man. Before the man had arrived in his home, the man annunced ''This is your new life, Max''. Now the dog had a house, and a name! It was late so he went to bed. ''What an amazing day!'' Max whispered to himself as he got to bed that night.